I was trying to clean up my messages in my email when I found a document named SECRET. It was a message from Inessa Camomot, my friend and my classmate back in highschool. I remembered, it was during in our IT class when I sent her a story with an open end, wala kasing ibang maisip na gawin.... and she replied. She also sent me the continuation of the story which is also hanging. So, exchange exchange kami ng mga stories, until, we were able to finish it. What's amazing about this was that we had no idea where or how our story was going. I was guessing what Inessa was going to put and maybe she was too.
I read the whole story, though there were some typographical errors and missing words and few mistakes in grammar, I was so amazed with what we were able to make it. It also gave me some lessons to learn, not only about love but also about life. That's why I really want to share this to every one. What if at one moment you would make a bad decision and regret it for the rest of your life?
SO HEreS A VERY SCARY MOVIE THAT INESSA AND I MADE. HORROR TALAGA!
ORIGINAL and UNEDITED!
nemia asiong
One day there was a girl friend and a boy friend who were once sweet and had a good relationship. But the girl felt cold to her boy friend and she decided to break up with him. But before she was about to announce this thing....her boy friend proposed to her and asked her to marry him....
but she chose to break up because she doesn't want to continue this relation ship.....
later on... after few years.... she never had a boy friend and she's getting older and older so she asked God to give back the last man she loved...
while she was praying inside the church, she found her boyfriend.... and then she went to him and said, "If you could still give me a chance... can I be your bride?"
Next thing that happened........... secret kapuy na ako!!!!
Inessa Camomot
The girl felt like crying but she simply said, "That's okay." and left the church.
nemia asiong
The girl cried and cried and cried and cried!!!!! oh my gosh!! She couldn't stop from crying..... and she terribly sorry... but she walked away..... after about a week somebody called her....
there was an accident the guy was hit by a drunk driver after sharing the word of God in their neighborhood. The girl was shocked and wondered why she was informed when they were apart and had almost forgotten each other. The nurse by the phone told her that her name was written in a card found in the pocket of the guy.
The guy suffered serious injury and did he stay alive, well he is in choma, tama ba spelling..... for more than a week already....
Inessa Camomot
The girl, though confused, went to the hospital where the guy was confined. When she entered the room, the guy was lying on the bed, his head covered with bandages. She went nearer to the bed and sat down beside it. She cried and touched the guy's hand. She said, "Why did this happen to you? You dont deserve this!" The girl sobbed and sobbed. She was about to leave because she couldnt take it anymore, but as she was about to stand, the guy held on to her hand. He whispered, "Dont go."
nemia asiong
the girl was shocked and asked her why... with no reasons.....
"what happened to you?", what do you feel now?
the boy said..... I'm sorry.... I forgive you.... do you still love me?
the girl said.... Yes....
the boy replied: "will you do something for me?"
the girl said... sure
the boy asked her: "will you marry me?"
the girl was shocked........
Inessa Camomot
"I cant marry you." the girl said at last.
The guy felt sad, "Why cant we be together?"
"Youre a priest. Youre committed to God. I cant." The girl said as tears fell from her eyes.
"I can quit being a priest. I just have to talk to the bishop." the guy said as he held her hands.
"That's stupid! God will never forgive you if you quit." the girl said.
nemia asiong
"If God would punish me for the mistake of loving you now and forever then I'll face whatever consequence He would give me. But if God would do that, God doesn't know the meaning of love. And He knows what my heart beats for....you..."
girl: "........"
"I became a priest not because I'm giving my self to God but because I am giving my self to you, and no one can take my heart but you...."
ang sweeeeeeeet!!!!!!
Inessa Camomot
the girl was shocked. They stared into eachothers eyes for a second or two and then the doctor came in.
"Hey,youre awake." the doctor said.
"Yes, but doc, can i come home today?" he asked.
"im sorry but you cant. you have to rest for a few days her in the hospital
nemia asiong
"Why do I have to take a rest? I know I'm fine."
"You should follow your doctor, its for your own good." the girl said
The doctor asked the girl,
"Are you the wife of this man?"
"NO doc, I was called by the hospital so I came here."
"Well, maybe your important enough for me to say something about him."
"What is it doc?"
"He's......... he's dying."
The girl was shocked.
"DYING? What? How? Why?"
"His brain was affected when he was hit, a nerve was malfunctioning."
The girl wasn't able to talk...
Inessa Camomot
"you must be kidding me! he cant die!!" the girl shrieked.
"i'm sorry, but its true. i'll leave it to your decision if you would want to tell him the bad news." the doctor said as he walked away.
The girl stood there for amoment. she cried a little but forced herself to come back in the room. The guy was still in bed, eyes closed.
"hey, you feeling okay?" the girl asked.
"huh? yeah. just a little headache." the guy replied.
"you'll be fine. i promise." the girl said.
"i know i will. because you're here." the guy said.
The girl forced herself not to cry. But it was hard because eventhough she denies it, she loves him so much. And death cant take him away from her.
nemia asiong
She slept beside her dying boy friend. And that night, she felt someone holding her hand. She kept her eyes closed. Later she wakes up and then realizes that her boyfriend was hardly breathing.
Inessa Camomot
"oh my gosh! nurse!" the girl screamed for help.
She was crying histerically when the nurses came in. the doctor was shouting orders to the nurses to take his pulse and try to make him breathe easy.
nemia asiong
She was in panic, while the incident was happening she was left behind. She thought of the happy moments she had with her boyfriend. She realized that she was the only one who thought the relationship wasn't going to work. She felt so bed and she blamed herself for everything that happened. She ran to the church and face to face with God.
" God.... is this your consequences?... how could you.... why do you have to do this to the person who did nothing but to love... why? Please... if I could only turn back the time when he proposed to me... I'd say yes.... Lord, I love him and if you think his doing the wrong decision of turning his back on you, please... I'll give him back to you just don't take his life.... I know I'm not worth to be loved by someone like him...."
She came back to the ICU... tama ba?.... and observes how her boyfriend was dying.... then the doctor surprisingly said..."He made it."
Then, with tears falling onto her face and holds her boyfriend's hand...
Boyfriend: If God would take me...... always put in your mind, soul, and heart... if I did the wrong choice.... I made the right thing... to love you is the best thing that happened in my life.
Girl: Don't worry, when we get home I'll cook you your favorite dish....
Boyfriend: Thaaankyouuu.......
They hugged each other. But suddenly she hears the sound of the monitor. "toootooootooooot" Then she feels that her boyfriend's arms falls. Then she looked at her boyfriend.... and it looked like he was fast asleep... but will never wake up. The girl wasn't able to speak, tears just came out of her eyes realizing that he's dead....................................................... tingnan natin ness!
Inessa Camomot
The doctor came in when he heard her cry. He rushed to the guy when he saw him lying lifelessly on the bed. He immediately called the nurses and they performed CPR on him. The girl was crying hopelessly in one corner while the doctors and nurses tried to bring back his life. After a few minutes, the doctor gave up.
"I'm sorry. but we lost him." he said in a deep tone.
The girl cried and cried and cried. She couldnt believe it. One second she was holding him in her arms and the next he was lifeless. He couldnt understand it.
"God, why?" she whispered as she went nearer to the bed.
She touched his cold hands and just cried beside him as the nurses covered his face with the blanket. ====nemic!! grabe na toh!!!1====
nemia asiong
Inessa Camomot
She stood on the edge of the building taking deep breaths. She breathed in deeply and stepped off the cliff. She felt the pressure in her lungs. She closed her eyes when she saw the ground coming closer to her.
BANG!
The girl woke up with a start. It was all a nightmare.
nemia asiong
Yeah. It's a terrible nightmare. It really looked real. She was perspiring! But then she's more surprised seeing that his boyfriend is beside her bed which means they're married.
"HOney are you okey the kids are waiting
last reply of inessa camomot....
"What?" the girl asked a little confused.
"The kids are ready to go to school." the guy said.
"Oh. okay." the girl replied.
"Hey, i love you." the guy said.
"Huh? i love you too." the girl said.
They kissed and the girl went to her two children.
They lived happily ever after.
last reply of nemia asiong...
Well.. that's how the story ends... but there's something that this girl should remember.. and that is to thank God for everyday, for everything, and for the person whom you might spend the rest of your life with.... let's take risks, let's make decisions wisely.... so that we won't regret..... Thanks for reading.
by-inessa and nemia
You see? Hindi siya nakakatakot kasi hindi siya horror? Hahah.... you know, I was able to recall my memories in highschool. I just couldn't leave it behind, and I'm bringing it wherever I go. It always keep me from going.
Anyway, that's the story we made, and I hope you'll like it. Kahit medyo may mali malipero it's the thought that counts. Lab yu NEss!
So thanks for dropping by people! See yah!
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